Reassessment

Having begun to edit my stock footage I have been adviced to reasses this plot line for my film by my teacher. She believed the plot to be far to comedic, therefor not a horror film rather a  "black comedy". So after a quick rethink, along with the help of freinds and teachers I have re thought up my video and will be
re-shooting tommorow. Below is the new story boards for the video: